megherao sab vese beray tader niye kore khela.
akash jure sandhya naame ,bristi bujhi oi uki day,
gayer pather dharei bodhhay ei sahorer itikatha!
feerche pakhi dale dale gothe ache se je bose,
kothay jeno kaadche khoka,fereni bujhi taar ma r baba!!
sandhye baati uthlo jole,bajlo je saakh-uludhoni,
ghanta jakhon uthlo nore,monta ki r thake kaaje?
eki sathe baaje dure bus er sathe autor je horn,
gram r sahor bujhi korche tabe sahaabosthan!!
akaashpane takiye dekhi oi ure jay urojahaj,
vabnaa gulo o oi ure jay kore megheder elomelo.
Khub Bristhi porchey naki Kolkata-Tey?? Aaj Chennai-Tey ekty bristhi porlo.. bikel bela. Here though it rains now, the main rain season is in November due to the north west monsoon...
ReplyDeleteReally you write too well.. other than teaching are you sure you do not publish poetry in bengali? Lukio Na !!
Your poem makes me feel that you are really standing out on your roof or balcony.. watching the oncoming dusk on a cloudy day...
and more than that it makes me feel you want to fly.....
khoob r porlo kotthay....tabe ager tulonay ektu besi..jemon kaalke dupure..r amjhe majhe jhiri jhiri haoway vor kore.
ReplyDeleteha ha haaa....na na lukobo keno er age tomar ekta comment e reply diyechi dekho ei blogei..
kobita jara valobasen taraai ei katha bolen..hay ekdomii thik eti kobita ti mone elo chande paycari korte korte khoob sundor amader chadtaa....anek baro r ekhan theke akaser eto rakom rang dekha jay je je keu kobi hoye jabe..r amar balconyta amar ghorer sab theke priyo jayga,jodio khoob choto tabu se amar sathe anek muhurto share kore.
r urte kaar na valo lage balo? tabe sabaai sabaar nijer maton kore urte cayy ei r ki.
aar khoob satyi katha bolte ki jakhon blog aromvo korechilm takhon kobita likhbo bole suru korini....kintu jar ja swavab..kichudin porei mathar pokagulo nore uthlo r tar sathe tomar mato amar kichu kobita premi o peye gelm byas ekhon etate likhte bosle kobita chara r kichu beroynaa....
ReplyDeletehaha!! mathar poka gulo bechey thakook!!
ReplyDeleteAmi jey kobita pori ta noy.. kintu tomar kobita gulo... amakey amaar school life-er kobita gulo monay koriyey dichhey... maney tumi amaar moddhey kobita porar ekta icchha jagiey dicchho... naholey shottyi.. ami ekabarey kath khotta...!! manoosh!!
haha!..
Ja bhebechilam! Chaad-O acchey ! Balcony -o acchey.. amar jey nei ta noy.. kintu keno jani uparer dikey takatey bhooley gechi!!
:-))