kinchi tomaar sango paoar ektu usno choar asa.
kinchi ami kincho tumi mulyobodher mulyoguli,
churi geche ja kichu sab jibon theke swapnoguli;
ache jibon nei sudhu tar caoa-paoar swapno-gocha
kothay ache jano ki sei churi jaoa cabir- gocha?
nei aj r konoi jawab thakle bolo sunbo sabii,
niruttor to thakbe jani baaki sabii swagokti ;
kimba hobe nijer kachei nijer jawab khuje neoa,
sabii baro fyakase taai ,faykase sab valo laga.
khujchi ami khujcho tumi curi jaoa samoy jato
pele bolo nebo ami du hath vore swapno jato.
lal hok ba neel hok taar ranger hiseb nebo nako
valo laga samoy amar firiye amay debe nako?
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ReplyDeletethnx...nijer mone kore sudhre deoar jonye.asole lekhar tagid theke likhte suru korechi bote tabe lekhar pare r pore dekhar abokaash hoyna.ekhn mone hocche satyi to dekha darkar chilo.jakhon bondhura keu ba ekebarei ajana keu comment kore takhon feere dekhi thik ki likhechilm.asole sab byaparei vison serious vabe dekharo bodhhay darkaar pore majhe majhe,jiboner kono ansoi bodhay casual thakte nei.ki balo?kajei abaro dhonyobaad .
ReplyDeletetabe seser kathagulo sudhrobaar pore cut korte giye dekhlm purotai ure gelo.asole r ekta personal katha janiye rakhi eta kintu serious je ei jantrotite ei jaygatate ekhono bises sarogaro hoini...r surute to ro kharap abostha chilo.tai ekbar lekhar poe jakhn najore porlo takhon khujei paini ki vabe correction korte hoy.i dont know whether u do believe or not.but its true.
r ekta katha jodi satyi nijer mone kore thako ager ansotuku abar rewrite kore dio plzzzzz.
"Phool futuk na futuk aj basanta"..can u plzz remove these wreaths?they are hurting me.let a solitary..masterly magestic stroke of fire make me forget the agony of my flowers!..frm pathorer phool,subhas mukherjee.samay..tomar apekhkhay roilam poth cheye,mora ichchegulo k buke nie..tumi asbe bole..saisab theke..sei kabekar chahnir poth dhore..aj pore achhi mrito jodhdhar vagare..samay aj baro kam kotha bole!
ReplyDeletetahole to tomar kathagulo o arthohin hoye porbe.ami ei kobitar linegulo r sathe ekdomii ekmot,tabe seser line tir sange noy(aj pore achi mrita joddhar bhagare....)asole valo samoy sabsamoyii mulyobaan tai bolechi kathagulo.tabole bartomaan amar kache mritobat noy.bartomaantai asole besi daami tai valo samoy ja chole geche taake ahoban korechi,bartomaantake roo sundor vabe upovog korara jonye.bojhate parlam?
ReplyDeletevalo laglo eto monojog diye amar lekha porecho dekhe.valo theko.
Sir,Mrito jodhdhar vagare...kothata te anek byango r kasto mishe achena?kono kichhu achieve korte hole judhdho korte hoy..ami aj byartha,tai jara judhdho kore moreche tader vagare(judhdho kore byartho hoyechi,tao prapyo samman na peye vagare phele dieche amay)..sei sab swapner dingulo(atit)k vebe ek2 sukhanuvab krbo..bt tar o upay nei,samay o aj patta dichchena amake..ek2 darie theke shonachchena sei dingulor kotha.bartaman k aswikar korini sir..bt bartaman ta k 1jan byartha jodhdhar chokhe dekhechi.
ReplyDeletederi holo na thakay...valo laglo vabnar goviratay..
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